Driving down the long driveway to Kaiaua the perfect camping spot then the camper hits a balder in the road! Everyone in the car squeals and our driver Boots hits on the brakes and brings the car to a halt. Everyone gets out of the car in a huff to see what the damage of the van was. All of sudden a magical fairy falls from the sky with a magical deodorant to fix the extremely damaged van. The fairy handed the magical deodorant to Boots who thanked her and slipped it in his fanny pack, they all climbed back in the van eager to see the magical deodorant work. Boots gets the magical deodorant out of his fanny pack, then sprays it all over the van not noticing it go in Randy’s eyes. Randy reachers for the wet wipes in the side of the door, then accidentally pulls the lever, the door flies open and he falls out onto the shiny sand of Kailua, camping time! Everyone hops out of the van in excitement and runs to check on Randy who is lying on the sand. Boots checks on the van and in shock it is magically fixed you would never have known it was broken, now time for a swim.
This is the work I did with Riley, Ella and Me
It was a challenge, we had to write a sentence one by one and create a story with it. First we had to come up with four categories, Character, Settings, Object and Incident. I think we did quite a good job.
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